The Traveling Dimensional Store

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

Writing quality is 5/5. Update stability is 5/5 Story development is 5/5 Character design is 5/5 World background is 5/5What more can I say?Yes I am a serial reviewer. Bite me.

"Sorry sir, a little incorrect, I mean 12 months".

Brycen who came back to wipe the stains and changed the napkin and the cutlery froze. His mouth twitched. He was working in this restaurant for two months now and actually, that man was quite famous here for losing his temper easily. Well, it wasn't his place to talk anyway. Like the diligent worker he was, he relayed the message he had been told to relay,

Genius Lawyer

" Artemis is old enough to go training with me and my men into the Grimm woods!!!!" Shouted my father.

    I sat down onto the floor and started to cry. I rubbed my face and started to laugh while crying at the same time. I was in shock of what happened and frustration that my guard has failed to protect their new head. All these assassination attempts if I live through them will they deem me worthy or lucky? I know that I had an idea as to how intense this whole world is but I didn't know that my life would be in danger every second of every day. I will have to train myself harder and faster.

After taking Hermoine to the house next door I followed dad back home. What greeted me was a warmth smile "Hello sweetie, how was your date?" Mom confronted me asking me about my 'so-called' date. "It was so fun mom, we traveled the world and also we saw dinosaurs and, and..." I acted like any child would do expressing their adventures.